We played and we laughed
Once more on the croquet lawn
With and without skill
A wonderful afternoon
Had by all together.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 10th, 2024 00:52
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a shortie today as the Gas Man Cometh.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
A fine write Gold.
We had the Gas Man cometh a couple of weeks ago.
Thank you Orchi.
Awe so nice dear Andy 🌹
Much appreciated Teddy, thank you.
Andy
laughter with friends while doing something one enjoys is as close to heaven as anyone will ever get. May you have many more such afternoons
So very true soren, I am sure there will be many more times like this. Thank you.
Andy
A really cool 😎 poem
short and sweet!
Wonderfully woven
to read a real treat!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Most kind Thad, thank you.
Andy
Awesome write
Tank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Beautiful word-painting of the scene.
Much appreciated Thomas, thank you.
Andy
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