I was doing finish work that day
I took a break that day
And watched Star Wars that day
I expected the call but not that day
When the call came that day
I was not expecting it to be that day
But I knew there would be a day
When I was told that you died Dad
A void opened up under me that day
And it’s still under me, today :(
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Aww, I am rather at a loss for words, for now you remind me of losing my own inimitible father--I cannot bear it even yet, but he is no longer here. I never, never expected it to be so soon. Very beautifully rendered with charming poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so much for sharing.
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