Time flows backward

sorenbarrett

Time flows backward
gravity's stream reversed
guilt in rash words
taken back in a life rehearsed

Falling upward
leaning on echoes of stone
listening to one word
malignant seeds sown

Rain, rivers, ocean, clouds
circles up and down
wax wing shrouds
half smile, half frown

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  • Teddy.15

    Time flows backward
    gravity's stream reversed
    guilt in rash words
    taken back in a life rehearsed

    Dearest sorrenbarret this is so significant to me this week, I said something to my mother in law because she did something I didn't like, for me it was over after I said my piece but she is italian.lol all hell broke loose. I'm still alive though 🤣

    • sorenbarrett

      Mother in laws are one thing, Italian is another put both togeather and you have something else. My mother in law was Italian as well but I was fortunate enough to be on her good side and she was a saint to me. Thanks for the read and review Teddy it is most appreciated.

      • Teddy.15

        Yes mine is an angel too unless I disagree lol

        • Doggerel Dave

          It's just the "gene of misery and agro" Teddy......lol

        • Alan R

          Nostalgia doesn’t forgive does it?

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Alan for the read and comment

          • orchidee

            Good write SB.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Orchi for the read. Appreciate it

            • adnan it is

              Beautiful poem!! Could nearly understand the chaos unleashed right there..

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much I appreciate the read and kind words of support.

                • adnan it is

                  A deserving comment for a beautiful poem 👏

                • Dan Williams

                  You and your economy of words still getting the message across. Jealous.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Dan my friend you humble me again. Yes less is more until it is less.Thanks for the read and comment it is appreciated

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Time flowing backward will take you to where you ave been already soren but they are just memories time flowing forward is exciting.

                    Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      So true Andy and although memories can be pleasent it is the present that counts. Thanks for the review and comment it is most appreciated

                    • River123

                      A superb use of science and emotion perfectly expressed. Thanks for writing it 👍👍

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you so much for the read and kind words of encouragement they are most appreciated



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