Another day

sorenbarrett

In the mist of dreams time weaves its way
light shard deflections in steaming ague
Life it seems is but another day
murky reflections in faded fog

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  • aDarkerMind

    murky reflections in faded fog...
    love that line.

    another fine write soren.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you for your kind words they are most appreciated

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Tony

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • 2781

          I have trouble remembering yesterday

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much for the read and comment

          • Teddy.15

            My day today is like fog that won't fade but these lines are gorgeous. So little words and another mountain of imagery and emotion. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much my friend for the read and kind words of support.I hope your day clears up.

            • Cassie58

              Today I am fortunate, my day is clear and sunny and my mood is upbeat. Then there are the other days I prefer to forget. Meaningful brevity with some strong visuals in the lines. Succinct piece, well worded.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much Cassie nice to hear your day is clear today. May it be always

              • Thomas W Case

                Beautiful.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks Thomas appreciate it

                • orchidee

                  In my 'meanwhile' times - ahh, another dish for KP - steaming ague. Are ya a chef?! lol.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks Orchi steamin ague is what others think of my cooking I'm quite satisfied with it

                  • Neville


                    at the end of the day one mans fog is another mans mist ..
                    succinct, to the point and probably very true ..
                    I like and sure aint gonna argue .. Neville

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks Neville this came to me out of a fog,. Just another misty day.

                    • Accidental Poet

                      The fog sometimes offers up a little gem like this. Excellently penned soren. 😉👍

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you so much Accidental for the review and kind words they are most appreciated

                        • Accidental Poet

                          Just giving credit where credits due. 😉

                        • NafisaSB

                          i hope the fog clears away completely, and the future is sunny and bright, and your poems will reflect them..

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you so much for the read Nafisa and for the kind wishes

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Very good words soren, time can be very elusive.

                            Andy

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you so much Andy for the review and as always such positive words

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you Gold for the read and as always such positive words of encouragement

                              • Tom Dylan

                                A fine write, Soren.

                                • sorenbarrett

                                  Thanks so much Tom for the read and encouragement



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