Dark Night

Tony36

Dark night in the woods

Hardly any light from the moon

Each sound sends a chill up your spine

The sound of a breaking twig

The howling of a wolf

The blowing of leavs

The sound of something in the bush

 

What was that

Who's there

Did something just touch me

On and on though the night

With every sound

Your nerves are tight

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 17th, 2024 07:25
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  • AuburnScribbler

    A wonderfully penned gothic scene here Tony36, a nice little September prelude to Halloween month that is to come.

    Also, what you have written here is also a nice poetic piece of warning, saying: tread with care on any journey.

    Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

    • Tony36

      Thak you, I hope all is well with you as well

      • AuburnScribbler

        You are very welcome, and I am OK thanks.

      • Cassie58

        Very atmospheric. A scary place to be. Venture at your own peril. You create the scene and the feelings of apprehension and fear. Well conveyed Tony.

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • rrodriguez

          Indeed! Nerves are tight. I'm going to move to a place like that. Fortunately, the wolves are not native to Puerto Rico. Thanks for sharing.

          • Tony36

            Thank you and you're welcome

          • Goldfinch60

            Super words Tony, being in the woods at night can be very scary.

            Andy

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Dan Williams

              I keep expecting something to jump out and say "BOO". Well done.

              • Tony36

                Thank you



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