Dark night in the woods
Hardly any light from the moon
Each sound sends a chill up your spine
The sound of a breaking twig
The howling of a wolf
The blowing of leavs
The sound of something in the bush
What was that
Who's there
Did something just touch me
On and on though the night
With every sound
Your nerves are tight
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Author:
Tony36 (
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A wonderfully penned gothic scene here Tony36, a nice little September prelude to Halloween month that is to come.
Also, what you have written here is also a nice poetic piece of warning, saying: tread with care on any journey.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Thak you, I hope all is well with you as well
You are very welcome, and I am OK thanks.
Very atmospheric. A scary place to be. Venture at your own peril. You create the scene and the feelings of apprehension and fear. Well conveyed Tony.
Thank you
Indeed! Nerves are tight. I'm going to move to a place like that. Fortunately, the wolves are not native to Puerto Rico. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you and you're welcome
Super words Tony, being in the woods at night can be very scary.
Andy
Thank you
I keep expecting something to jump out and say "BOO". Well done.
Thank you
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