A Neighbour Loved

Neville

A Neighbour Loved

 

The weight is falling

off her

and I am scared ..

She is,

after all, a survivor

of cancer ..

Yet she still wants

to dance

like she did in her

teens

and get this ..

Today her smile

remains

just as infectious

as it did

back then too ..

Sometimes,

I feel like yelling

her name

from across

the road and into

her garden,

then telling her

in whispers ..

Oh’ my love on my

word, I swear

I do still adore thee ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2024 01:39
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write N.

    • Neville



      Thank you Steven. I had not long been thinking about you & your siblings 👍

    • Mase ♪

      Beautiful write Neville! 👍🙂

      • Neville



        I really am most grateful .. not only for the visit, but also for your encouraging review note .. cheers

      • Cassie58

        Who would not want to hear those whispered words? You break hearts with your poetry. You are certainly pressing all the write buttons with this one Neville. There’s poetry and then there is this. Beautiful.

        • Neville



          Thank you so much my friend .. I am indeed uplifted .. Neville

          • Neville



            Thank you so much my friend .. I am indeed uplifted .. Neville

          • sorenbarrett

            Relationships over the years and how some things never change. Although the flesh rots the emotions remain fresh, a child's heart in an old body. Absolutely lovely

            • Neville


              You got me so write my friend .. thank you for your understanding & kind response .. Neville

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Neville, Neville, With talk like that you will not get mis-laid.

              • Neville



                Maybe miss took tho' eh' .. perhaps .. tis indeed good to hear from you Jez .. I do hope you are keeping well .. Neville

              • Doggerel Dave

                Maps a long relationship, its constancy so very well, Neville. I felt that one.

                • Neville



                  Thank you Dave .. Neville

                • Thomas W Case

                  So beautiful. Well done.

                  • Neville


                    I am most grateful .. thank you .. Neville

                  • Tony36

                    Great write

                    • Neville


                      Thanks .. N

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Wonderful words Neville, those love of yesterday are never forgotten.

                        Andy

                        • Neville


                          Thank you kindly Andy .. Neville

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Just beautiful, Neville. A fine write.

                          • Neville

                            You don’t mind if I thank you then Tom .. Thank you then .. Neville



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