Two women, knee deep in snow, prays in front of a Shrine
A cat walks, barely making footprints on the snow
A little bit down the frozen stream, a train has stopped
Meanwhile, the passengers, old and young, have a war of snowballs
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Author:
Finley Oaktree (Pseudonym) (
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This is too good! Almost akin to the aka "polish jokes" one with a blank white page claiming to be the image of ghosts roasting marshmallows without a fire, or something like that. Lovely and charmingly rendered with excellent details and a subtly humorous poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
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