Width of Sorrow

Dan Williams

The width of the sorrow

measured by the length of the commitment,

times the height of the passion

 can bring hysterical out of the depths.

No well-meaning empathy seems sincere,

only small relief is had from tears,

no consolation seems adequate.

Goodbye my love, goodbye my friend.

  • Author: Dan Williams (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2024 00:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Never thought I would use this so often.
  • Category: Love
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  • Goldfinch60

    Such a very good emotive write Dan.

    Andy

  • Neville



    so very sad .. indeed I am saddened

  • sorenbarrett

    Clever tlhree dimensional thinking expressed in such good verse. Very well done



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