Life is but a dream a vision of ghosts
mind's dust and smoke from inner fires
with fuel of fears and hopes it coasts
navigating mist's hosts of desires
Ember of dawn glows in the hearth of day
Newly kindled flames of past lives
Black phantoms melt into a shadow's ballet
Without time's chains freedom survives
Memory drips through holes in a dream
drops falling in a directionless bend
to alite again in a new stream
an ocean of new dreams to extend
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: September 30th, 2024 04:43
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 54
Comments7
Wonderful write, Soren. You really packed a lot into this one.
Thanks Mutley for the review and most kind words
Surreal all write .. it reads like one of my very favourite Dali's .. 10/10 + @ least .. Neville
Thanks Neville your visits are allways appreciated
Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony
You're welcome
This is well done. Very enjoyable.
Excellent
Thanks so much David appreciate the read and kind words of support
Super words soren.
Andy
Thanks Gold for the read and kind words they are valued
Its such a beautiful write Soren!
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much Mason for the read and most generous words of encouragement
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