Life is but a dream

sorenbarrett

Life is but a dream a vision of ghosts
mind's dust and smoke from inner fires
with fuel of fears and hopes it coasts
navigating mist's hosts of desires

Ember of dawn glows in the hearth of day
Newly kindled flames of past lives
Black phantoms melt into a shadow's ballet
Without time's chains freedom survives

Memory drips through holes in a dream
drops falling in a directionless bend
to alite again in a new stream
an ocean of new dreams to extend

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2024 04:43
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Mutley Ravishes

    Wonderful write, Soren. You really packed a lot into this one.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Mutley for the review and most kind words

    • Neville


      Surreal all write .. it reads like one of my very favourite Dali's .. 10/10 + @ least .. Neville

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Neville your visits are allways appreciated

      • orchidee

        Good write SB.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much Orchi

        • Tony36

          Well written and expressed

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Tony

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • David Wakeling

              This is well done. Very enjoyable.
              Excellent

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks so much David appreciate the read and kind words of support

              • Goldfinch60

                Super words soren.

                Andy

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks Gold for the read and kind words they are valued

                • Mase ♪

                  Its such a beautiful write Soren!
                  Thanks for sharing.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks so much Mason for the read and most generous words of encouragement

                  • A.H. Browning

                    Excellent‼️‼️‼️

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much for the read and your most kind word of support. It is most appreciated

                    • tallisman

                      Beautifully expressed.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you Tallisman for you read of this poem and you most kind comment



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