May love’s wonderful beauty ever sing
As it flows gently and ever so bright
Keeping close the warmth that pure love can bring
Ever keeping brightness within its light.
Lingering in our heart like stars above
Our hearts become as one and never part
Valuing the strength of our lasting love
Ever flowing free from our loving heart.
Every moment it is there each day
Vowing to overcome those days of strife
Ever defending against its decay
Renewing that love that is in our life.
Bringing joy and love ever in our lives
Ever will be that love within us strives.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 1st, 2024 01:06
- Category: Love
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Comments8
A sonnet is obviously your thing - and then acrostic to top it off!
How long do these take you? Are you sure you are eating properly and still playing the odd game of croquet?
Not suffering for your art? Anyway Good luck to you. Thanks Andy.
It surely seems to be that way Dave and I don't know why but they don;'t seem to take long for me to write once I get an idea of what to write about.
Thank you for your kind words.
Andy
Well I Neva .. becuz I neva have .. This must surely be a first sir Andy 💛
Thanks Neville, I did put another one on here on 21st September.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
And ever shall it be. 😉👍
Thank you AP, yes it shall ever be.
Andy
Another beautiful sonnet Gold that warms the heart and brightens the day. Very nice
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
Beautiful Rhyme scheme, Andy, and an acrostic to boot. MY MY how you fly.
Thank you Jerry.
My Muse seems to be working overtime. LOL
Andy
👏👏 'clapping'
An awesomazing
romantic 😍 Acrostic
Sonnet my friend!! 👍
Poetic perfection
beginning to end!! 😀
Much enjoyed!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Much appreciated Thad, thank you.
Andy
Great write Andy
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