I wish that my lawn was EMO!
Then I would never half to mow.
Oh that is high on my wish list.
Why that would make 'cutting' a breeze.
And I could do just as I please;
bass fishing I just can't resist!
**
That's why I'm pissed like this right now.
I've missed a lot now holy cow.
I hope it will come true one day.
I'd so enjoy this time of year,
kick back and sip a frosty beer.
And much out on a 'fish filet.
**
I pray this grass I could cut less,
that all this stress would go away~
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- Author: Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 1st, 2024 09:05
- Comment from author about the poem: The Jeffreys Sonnet was created by John J. Alcorn' it is isosyllabic (only 8 syllables per line) 2 sestets with a cross rhymed couplet (the cross rhyme) is in the 2nd to 4th syllable in each of the two lines of the couplet. Also there is a cross rhyme in the second sestet ( between the 2nd to 4th syllable ) tying the first sestet to the 2nd... The rhyme scheme is : aabccb - ddeffe -(e)g -(g)e
- Category: Humor
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Comments2
G’day Thad,
That ad is real bad taste I’ll have you know;
But as for the poem, do take a bow.
Though leave the mower, shove it in the shed -
Go Japanese, just use pebbles instead.
Enjoyed the poem but the underlying technicalities gave me a headache. I’m a simple soul, just about able to manage couplets and quatrains……..
Howdy Dave! 👋 🤠
Thank you for another
cool 😎 poetic commento!!
I know you don't like
different forms some I don't
like myself. Lol 😆
I like the challenge bro! 😉
Grrrrr8 a hearin' from ya!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Mowing our lawn is on the list of things to do Thad. LOL.
Andy
Howdy Andy!! 😀👋
Thanks for stopping
by guy!! Great hearin'
From ya!!
Keep a smiling!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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