Once more we were there next to Our River
The sun shined on it bringing us wonder,
To be by it again made me quiver
And my heart started to beat like thunder.
The glory of Our River brought us hope
That we would flow on its path forever
Taking us to that place where there is scope
And our lives would never ever sever,
Taking Our Spirits to that wonder place
Where new life moves into infinity
Ever giving us such beauty and grace
With our god forming us our trinity,
Our River is so meaningful to us
And will take us to a wonderful place.
-
Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 4th, 2024 01:09
- Comment from author about the poem: The water has gone down and we could walk along the path beside Our River.
- Category: Special occasion
- Views: 31
- Users favorite of this poem: Qurrathul Ain
Offline)
Comments7
This is one o them deja vu poems isn't it .. makes me feel like I've been here before .. Neville
I go there quite regularly Neville and love every moment.
Andy
Ah good. yes, some pathways next to parts of a river or two I know, were flooded at times. Enjoy the walks!
Thank you Orchi, we always do enjoy the walks.
Andy
Beautiful poem. Took me on a journey down by the riverside
Thank you David, much appreciated.
Andy
Very nice Andy rivers hold a special place of beauty and serenity. moving water returning to its place of birth is something moving in the soul.
Thank you soren. Yes so very true rivers do have a special place of beauty in our lives.
Andy
Nature, it’s a beautiful thing. Nice!😊
It certainly is Ben, thank you.
Andy
A beautiful poem
eye pleasing imagery indeed! 👍
Eloquently penned my friend
and a treat to read! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Most kind Thad, thank you very much.
Andy
Beautiful.
Thank you Thomas, much appreciated.
Andy
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.