Mad Dog in America

Neville

Mad Dog in America

 

Mad Dog

punched a hole

in the wilderness ..

Then built

a ghetto to wrap

around himself

and the pack

that followed him ..

There were

of course those,

who both

feared and who

thought him

some kind of crazy ..

While one

or two others

perhaps,

had not got a clue

why they

admired him from

what they

thought was a safe

distance ..

Those one’s

reminded me so

much of sheep

I just had to laugh ..

Two shots later

and he is

still in the running

while I am

stuck here building

a deep bunker

for me and mine

and all those whom

I love and hold dearly ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 6th, 2024 03:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: I may not get any Brownie points for this, but hey' .. who care's and whose counting 🤍
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    I of course won't get any hidden meaning there may be in this. I hardly do! lol.

    • jarcher54

      Your comments slay me! Thanks for being such an astute commentator Genius.

      • Neville



        No worries then ..

        • Neville


          probably just as well ..

        • jarcher54

          The hell you say?

          • Neville



            I am a bit confused write now, who is or has commented on what ..

            • jarcher54

              Are you suggesting there's a mad dog over here???

              • Neville



                Yep ..

                • jarcher54

                  I think it may be a pack ...

                  • Neville



                    You are absolutely write ..

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Furious agreement there, then......

                    • Neville



                      ... Yep

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Excellent work.

                      • Neville



                        Morning my time Thomas .. thanks for the thumbs up 👍

                      • sorenbarrett

                        A true portrayal of American history and its expantion then deterioration and general paranoia. Good write Neville

                        • Neville



                          I am so glad you concur my friend .. p.s. I'm still digging .. Neville

                        • Dan Williams

                          If I thought building a bunker would help, I would be hard at it. When I was in grade school we would have drills where you were to hide under your desk; right. Words of wisdom here.

                          • Neville



                            Snap .. me too .. Oh' n thanks, not only for the very kind visit, but for the memory .. Neville

                            P.S. Neither of my kids believed me when I told em ..

                          • Goldfinch60

                            My bunker was destroyed Neville that is why I normally think outside the box.

                            Andy

                            • Neville



                              Very sensible under the circumstances ..



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