Let’s steal a broken down truck
Drive deep in the woods till our tires become stuck
Dive into the backseats with our old raggedy quilt
Red wine stains from where we previously spilt
Breathing in each others scent
Oh the musical rain from the skies are sent
Stripped naked our souls lay bare
Tender embrace our eyes lock in and stare
This night reveals our inner vulnerable state
We pull in close so neither can escape
That raggedy quilt vacuums in our air
United we become a breathless pair
We lay both fulfilled as the raindrops drops soften
We look up to the stars inhibitions forgotten
Open and pure we lay to bed our scares
As this beautiful night we’ll share each other beneath the glistening stars
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Author:
MaxSmith (
Offline) - Published: October 8th, 2024 13:44
- Comment from author about the poem: Returning back with an old poem. Written when I was last here. Hopefully I can get some new words flowing. Been a very rough year but I am definitely on the other side of it. Hoping to become inspired again.
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Comments11
What a great reintroduction to your ink Max my word, how much you have been missed Miss .. Wishing you nothing but the best of All Good Things, Neville
Very much appreciate the read Nev. Feels great to back. Starting a fresh.
A romantic, sensuous poem written with great imagery and an enticing entry full of excitement and allure. Nicely done
Thanks so much for the read, very much appreciated.
Welcome back Maxine
Passionate as ever
Hopefully inspiration is in the post
Looking forward to reading more
Thank you so much Stevie
I do appreciate your kind words.
This one is old but gives me fond memories of writing it.
Still beautiful as ever my dear Maxine,
Thank you beautiful
A Sensual Sational,
romantic and magical write!! 👏
Eye pleasing imagery
and my pleasure to recite!! 🏆
Thank you poetess for
sharing, to read a delight! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🌹 Thad
Thank you Thad, for such a warm response.
So glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you stopping by.
Nice to hear of gentle kind nights, seem in short supply these days. Nice write.
Most definitely
Thank you so much for the visit, most appreciated
Such wonderful words Max, welcome back and may your inspiration grow each moment.
Andy
Hey Andy
Thank you so much for the read, always welcomed and appreciated.
Good write M.
Thanks Orchi
Grat write, MaxSmith.
Thanks so much
You haven't lost your poetic touch. Great to have you back. 👍
Beautiful painting of this scene.
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