Earth's Birth Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



God sat down and created our new earth,

He brought forward clouds, sea and land.

Life was brought to the world with brand new birth,

And animals roamed the earth in their band.

 

Then man was created to rule over all,

A woman joined him to create new birth.

God watched them move forward over their sprawl,

Making out what they would ever be worth.

 

He then came down to them and rightly said,

You will have complete control of this all,

Of all corners of this world and its land

And from all its corners you can now trawl.

 

God moved away and made the new world round,

Laughing loud as no corners could be found.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 10th, 2024 01:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Nobody has any idea how to control our world.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 53
  • Users favorite of this poem: Abdullah123
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  • Neville


    Both you & He ..

    (assuming He is the correct, most appropriate and or acceptable prefix)

    are very cleva indeed .. Neville 🤍

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Neville.

      The prefix is the one each person uses, seriously as far as I am concerned god is the force that started the 'big bang'.

      Andy

    • David Wakeling

      This is excellent. The history of the Earth with a twist at the end.No corners on a round Earth, Very clever.

      • Goldfinch60

        So kind David, thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Orchi.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          You accomplished your promise in several past responses and now you have me chuckeling with your most clever sonnet.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Soren, very much appreciated.

            Andy

          • John Prophet

            Well said!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thanks John.

              Andy

            • Abdullah123

              I really like what you have done with this concept. Bravo

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Abdullah, thank you.

                Andy

              • MaxSmith

                Very clever Andy

                A fab read

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Max, thank you.

                  Andy

                  • MaxSmith

                    Your most welcome

                  • Tony36

                    Excellent write Andy

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Much appreciated Tony, thank you.

                      Andy

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome Andy

                      • Thad Wilk

                        Haaaaa, 😄
                        Looks like God has
                        a sense of humor I'd say! 🤣 🙏
                        Last two lines
                        just blew me away! 🏆
                        Best regards ✌️ Thad

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Yes god does have a sense of humour. LOL. Thank you Thad.

                          Andy

                        • Bigguy

                          I love sonnets! Very nice!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you Bigguy, much appreciated.

                            Andy

                          • Poetic Licence

                            A really enjoyable read

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Much appreciated Tobani, thank you.

                              Andy

                              • Poetic Licence

                                You are very welcome



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