being an unlit candle
an unlit match stick
will surely not suffice
neither the twain shall meet
unless you strike one
the other remains and
unless the lit shall kiss it
the other still abides
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to work not done, ideas never implimented, intentions left undone, words not spoken and life not lived. A masterpiece lit
Many thanks Soren. That’s so gladdening to hear 🙏🏻
Excellent
Thanks Tony 🙏🏻
You're welcome
Good write A.
Cheers Steve! Hey Fido!
Excellent work.
Thanks Thomas 🙏🏻
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