In my night
terror,
I hear the pounding
of
your wings, ripping and
tearing
at my feeble heart.
It's beating,
but
barely,
bomb-blasted by your
attack.
your love is like
a stroke;
like a bloated toad.
I'm road weary,
teary-eyed like a
sunflower.
And you scream in
the darkness like
a lamb.
I long to cum in
you.
I'm like dentures
chewed on by a stray dog;
teeth missing,
jagged like a
jack-o-lantern.
Damage control is
your best bet.
I let you way too
far in.
No turning back now.
I'm like a dumb
cow led to slaughter.
I'm miles away.
You're on a
different
island.
- Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 11th, 2024 18:26
- Comment from author about the poem: https://booksie.chainletter.io/i/thomaswcase888 Here is a link to my recently published e book (limited edition) Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments6
Maybe that island will get closer Thomas.
Andy
Thanks. I appreciate it.
Those pounding of the wings will be me - I'm The Birdman' but I never take off! lol.
Thank you.
Alienation expressed in stark terms of pain. I can feel the aloneness and desperation. Nicely done
Thank you.
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Wonderfully woven
a dynamite write! ๐งจ
Great use of metaphor;
mesmerizing imagery,
and to read a delight! ๐
Best regards peace โ๏ธ Thad
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Very nice from a fellow 'lost love' specialist.
Thank you.
Happy birthday to ya!
Thanks.
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