Our Intense Love Tanka.

Goldfinch60



And the rain fell hard,

Such intensity was felt,

But not like our love,

Our love so very intense

To flood our lives for ever.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2024 01:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Our love gets stronger every moment.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 61
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  • David Wakeling

    A love for the ages. Thats amazing

    • Goldfinch60

      So true David, thank you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • Neville


      You are one very lucky fella .. but you clearly know it .. Neville 💛

      • Goldfinch60

        I certainly am Neville, thank you.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        There is nothing like love when it is felt. It is a very great force. Lovely Gold

        • Goldfinch60

          So very true soren, thank you for your kind words.

          Andy

        • Thomas W Case

          Fantastic work.

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind Thomas, thank you.

            Andy

          • Dan Williams

            Simple but effective. Nicely done.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Dan, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Thad Wilk

              A wonderful Tanka
              so romantic and sweet
              I must say! 😍
              Captivating indeed
              brought a smile to my day!! 😊
              Thanks for sharing!!
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

              • Goldfinch60

                Much appreciated Thad, thank you.

                Andy

              • tallisman

                Yes!



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