It's been raining for a long while now
last night, I did something
that I've always dreamed of doing
I got naked and I danced
in that rain, the rain
that's been pounding my roof
for weeks, day and night
pounding the grass
pounding the trees
and the ground, still warmed
by last summer's presence
It was 3 AM
just me, the rain and
the great, yet tired moon
and of course... my soul
which has just sprung back to life
maybe all she ever needed...
was a moonlit shower.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
I am sure that was quite an experience to drown in the downpour. Nice lines.
I certainly didn't drown. 🌹
Remember when my small children danced naked in the rain. I'm afraid if I did it might blind someone. A fun read Teddy sensual in the most tastefull way
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret for your most gracious words my dear friend. 🌹
Beautiful and passionate. What a glorious image, sweet Teddy.
Thank you beautiful Thomas, I hope you didn't just give me a fave for the art that's not me 🤣 hugs my dear friend. 🌹
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