empty heart

jim56

when a heart is empty lonliess  everywhere
love that you once knew now longer there
mind is in a whirl spinning round and round
gone now has the love that your heart once found

everyday you wake is something that you dread
life becomes a stuggle to face the day ahead
everything around you is just an empty space
now the world you  live in is just an empty place

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 20th, 2024 05:29
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  • sorenbarrett

    Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why solitary confinement is reserved for the worst offenses.

    • jim56

      lonlieness is an empty place to be as you say
      thanks for comment

    • Tony36

      Excellent

      • jim56

        thanks for comment means a lot

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Goldfinch60

          I have been in that place when my wife dies five years ago, but luckily life moves on.

          Andy

          • jim56

            its hard but life has to carry on as you say
            thankyou for comment



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