You said your love would always stay
and from my arms you'd never stray.
Your promises you did betray.
It's such a heavy price to pay.
~`~
'Twas all an act just a screenplay.
Your words of love they sure did sway,
but were all lies to my dismay.
This sadness I can't keep at bay.
~`~
My tears are real that I display,
my blue skies now have all turned gray.
Lately I just can't make headway.
This pain's not easy to downplay.
~`~
Still miss you babe what can I say.
Been two years since you left today.
It feels like it was yesterday,
don't think I'll ever be okay?
~`~
I shan't forget that fateful day,
now my whole life's in disarray.
For your return each night I pray.
Your mem'ry just won't fade away~
~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
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So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done
Excellent write Thad, best regards
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”
- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’
Kudos as above, Thad.
Thanks Dave!! 🐶 🐕 👋
And by the way,
your poetic comments
always bring a smile
to my day! 😜
Best regards ✌️ Thad
They get my rhymer muscle flexed gently..... I finish here fresh and firing on all cylinders.
So the 'Thanks' should come from me, Thad.
Very clever and good loving words Thad.
Andy
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