A Haiku Sequence.
Garage Sale Across the Street
“Garage sale” is yelled
Across the street by children
Having youthful fun.
Sunbeams On a Church
The warm sunbeams shine
In golden fancies upon
The quaint little church.
Wafting Floral Blooms
Clipped grass sweetly wafts
While late summer floral blooms
Fill the eager nose.
At the Church Bazaar
The breeze gently whisks
The faces of people there
At the church bazaar.
The Busy Sound of Voices
Inside the voices
Fill the long rectangle room
With a busy sound.
Joyful Shopping Spree
“I’ll take that right there,”
The man excitedly said
With a twinkling joy.
Charity Trinkets
Items and trinkets
Sold as the greatest of deals
For the church’s cause.
Joyous Community
Community fills
The joyously bustling hall
At the church’s bazaar.
© 2024 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
- Author: Tristan Robert Lange ( Offline)
- Published: October 23rd, 2024 02:55
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Comments4
The group togeather makes for more of an atmosphere good choice
Thank you! I am so thankful you felt the sequence worked! This was my first attempt as, admittedly, I am new to haiku (ooh a rhyme!), but found the observational, mindful nature of the form to be most rewarding! Again, thank you for reading and coommenting! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
A fine write T. I thought it was someone sneezing - all those Haikus (Ahh-choos!). Corny joke from me there! lol.
Corny jokes are always most welcome my friend! Where would the world be without humo(u)r? Thank you so much for reading and for the “God bless yous”.. Now I better stop typing before I sneeze a ninth time! 🤣😂
These are very charming and all the more too delightful thus rendered in tasteful bite-size senryu stanzas. I love it! Winsome with a subtle, joyous poignancy in tow, haunted by the sense I can't pin down, it's too beautiful with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing!
such a vivid picture - can almost see myself queuing up to buy a trinket..
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