A poet once said
poems are never finished
I, believe it's true
judgement dims the flame
and so the greatest poets
are those who have faith.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Senryu 🌹
- Category: Reflection
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You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these two Senryu went unnoticed as such until I read your note. Highly uncommon to be able to read so fluently from one line to the next you did this in both cases. Furthermore the last incorporates a metaphor is poetic, is philosophical and gramatic a definate favorite. Lovely
Wow, that's a beautiful and kind review dear sorrenbarret thank you dear friend 🌹
I also believe this to be the main truth about poems and poetry! Good stuff. 👍🏻
Thank you so much dear arqios 🌹
So very true, sweet Teddy.
Thank you sweet Thomas 🌹
A wonderful Senryu,
thoughts and message too! 💯
Brilliantly composed
and ever so true!! ⭐⭐⭐
Thanks for sharing poetess!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
Thank you so much dear Thad ☘️ 🌹 glad to know you enjoy my scribbles. 💙
i agree with you - the poets and poems will live for eternity
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB 🌹
always welcome - cheers, keep it coming
e must all keep the faith in what we write Teddy,
Andy
Yes indeed dear Andy, thank you ❣️
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