Four Seasons of Love
Love in the Winter cold
is best shared by a fire.
The heat that’s shared is two-fold.
Love is Springtime’s outpouring
warm and sweet like the first rain
whose wetness is life-restoring.
Love in the Summer sweat
brings sultry weekends at seaside
climaxed by lying to watch the sunset.
Love in the Autumn, at best
brings a devilish bite to the air
and leaves, like broken hearts, to harvest.
- Author: MendedFences27 ( Offline)
- Published: October 25th, 2024 12:25
- Comment from author about the poem: Like the seasons it is constantly changing.
- Category: Love
- Views: 12
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
Comments4
I like this very much Phil it says a lot more than one might first think .. indeed it gets, or appears to get even more cleverer each time I look at it .. it may have been a long time in the making, but as far as I am concerned, it was well worth the wait .. Neville
Thank you, Neville. You hit the nail on the head. I put much thought into this. You saw the depth in it and that's all I could ask. Thanks again. - Phil A.
The variable tempo of a relationship you have mirrored very neatly in tying to the seasons, Phil.
Your pieces on 'Love' come, for me, very close to the real thing.
Thank you, DD. "The real thing" is quite a compliment. Thanks
Apologies Phil. One of the many bees in my bonnet is that what passes for 'Love' is oftentimes infatuation.
Yours feel very real to me.
Wonderful words Phil showing how life can be different in each season.
Andy
Thank you, Andy. Love can change with the seasons.
Love in the Winter cold
is best shared by a fire.
The heat that’s shared is two-fold.
This one would be my favourite along with the sunset, I vision a log fire and snow outside the window
Beautiful Phil. 🌹
Thank you, Teddy. A log fire and snow outside is quite the scene. I guess the other would be lying on the beach watching the Sunset. They keep changing if you re-read them.
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