In shadows cast by doubt, our truths reside,
Once cloaked in whispers, masked by fleeting lies,
But now the veils of silence fall aside,
Revealing hearts where honesty hidden lies.
No longer shall our voices drown in shade,
For every word once hushed now finds its breath.
These tales we weave, no longer left to fade,
Exposes strength in facing fear and death.
Those lies that bound us break like fragile chains,
As clarity ignites each dawn’s embrace.
In openness, we shed our past's refrains,
And step into the light, a vibrant space.
To no longer be belied is to reclaim,
Our rightful story, OURS; in truth's bright flame.
- Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 26th, 2024 06:00
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments10
Great write
Thanks Tony ππ»
You're welcome
A voice at last, wonderful πΉ
Thatβs what poetry has been from the earliest days π
Cryptic this write speaks of how a lie continued out of fear can dispell such fear by exposure. Several good lines (Once cloaked in whispers, masked by fleeting lies,) Very nice Cryptic
There is a certain release with exposure however unpleasant or welcomed that exposure is deemed. Thanks Soren ππ»
A heart is best know when it speaks of truth. ππ
And known shall it ever be should in poetry it is laid bare!
A fine write A.
Thanks O.
Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
Thanks Thomas ππ»
Now then mate, having got all that off ya chest and out into the open, don't you feel a whole lot better .. ππthat's a deliberate dubble thumbs up in case anyone might be wondering if I got the DT's or summat .. Neville
Sometimes just to let it go and letting loose makes us able to breathe again. Thanks N ππ»
Super words arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy
Enjoyed going through your words. Lovely lines.
Thanks for letting me know. You are much appreciated ππ»
"Shadows cast by doubt" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.
Thanks DW, much appreciated ππ»
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