I'll always remember, how we met that day.
I was hooked immediately, you lit up my life!
You turned me on, really took my breath away.
You were with me everywhere I'd go.
I was at ease from your warm, slow burning glow!
``
Then my Doctor on a visit said to me,
that it was best, we part.
He said that in the end my friend;
that you'd surely destroy my heart.
I could not hide the tears that I cried.
Giving you up was very, very rough.
And living without your 'nicotine',
getting through each day'd be tough.
``
I taste you constantly on my lips;
your smell, still lingers on my finger tips
It's torture trying to live without you,
you are on my mind each day and night!
But I knew all along; you'd do me wrong,
that the "Surgeon General", was right~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 26th, 2024 11:25
- Comment from author about the poem: A true sad love story folks! (cry)
- Category: Humor
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Comments7
Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse for years before we give up. A great write
Hii Soren!! 👋🤠
Thanks for your awesome
comment you sent my way! 👍
Yup, many have love affairs
that hurt us! 😢
Great a hearing from ya,
y'all have a great day!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
LOL I too was once a smoker giving up was the best thing but yes, I did miss that sleek camel very much for a long while. 🤣 Kudos.
Hii Teddy!! 👋 🧸
Thank you for
visiting poetess!!
Glad you quit by the way!✌️🎉
Great hearin' from ya,
y'all have a NICE day!!
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
G'day Thad - usual spot:
Nico was my gal once; kissed her regularly;
So now smoke gets in my eyes, and I cry.
Some love affairs ain’t wot they’re cracked up to be;
Why was it so early we wanted to die?
Don't miss her at all now.... but it has been thirty five years......
Howdy Dave!! 😁🤠
Wow, 35 years apart, no jive! 😳
That's probably why
you're still alive!! 🤣
Thanks for your very
poetic commento bro!! 🏅
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
'Pleasure Thad. A fairly mild COPD is my only not very cherished memento.
Captivating, intriguing writing , speak so much and shows your heart felt words
Hii Ezekiel! 👋 🤠
Thanks guy for
stoppin' by!! 👍
Happy you enjoyed!!
Y'all have a great day!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
I lost track of the number of years since I quit .. but it's still the tobacco that counts, or so they used to say .. very much enjoyed sir .. your poem I mean .. Neville
Hii ya Neville!! 👋 🤠
Thanks for stopping
by!! 👍
Yeah I quit too, been
'bout 15 years now!🎉
Best regards ✌️ Thad
When did ya meet me?! (lol).
Hii Orchidee!! 👋 🐹🐹
😱 I totally forgot when¿¿ 🤔😈
Best regards ✌️😄. Thad
I used to be a heavy smoker and gave up exactly forty two years ten days ago on 16th October 1982. Not that I am counting of course.
Andy
Hii ya Andy!! 👋 🥸
Forty two years 10 days
Oct 16th, holy cow🐮!
You gutter be a gazillion
years old by now¿? 🤔
Thanks for stopping by guy!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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