Whispers To The Ocean

Young Fella

 

Whispers To The Ocean 

Day 3

(She conversed with the ocean)

Thank you for the heartbeat within,

For my heart pulses in love, as your waves rage for me.

Thank you for the smile in my mind,

My smile reflects yours, like light on your waters.

Thank you for the fire of our desire;

Your fire, a bright magma deep within.

Thank you for the pleasure beneath my skin,

All wet, as your waters cover me, no escape.

My love, thank you for the kindness and tenderness,

For your vastness, calm and tender, follows me everywhere.

 

By her, to me, and through me

 

  • Author: MRF (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2024 15:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: "She Spoke to the Ocean" portrays an intimate conversation between a woman and the ocean. It expresses gratitude for love, desire, and connection. The interplay of fire and water symbolizes passion and tranquility.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 18
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  • Wordsandsilence

    There's no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.

    • Young Fella

      I’m glad you enjoyed my words. They convey the profound bond between two lovers. A beautiful story waiting to unfold. Thank you for your comment.

    • sorenbarrett

      Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem

      • Young Fella

        Thank you so much, I’m pleased the rhythm and symbolism resonated with you. I wanted to capture that ebb and flow, like waves, and the depth that only love can bring. Your thoughtful words are encouraging and motivating. Thanks

      • arqios

        Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!

        • Young Fella

          Thanks for your comment. Pleased to see that my words spoke to you.

        • Neville


          Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville

          • Young Fella

            Thank you, Neville! I’m glad you decided to visit and share your thoughts. I look forward to many more exchanges like this. I’ll keep writing, your encouragement means a lot



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