More than clay

sorenbarrett

When memory's prick revives the sting of yesterday's thorn
and the scent of rot on today's breeze is born
breath deep sleep, that buries wool of shame shorn
pluck out the poisoned arrow fetid and worn

Open wounds past as a feathered scar will last
Birds of carrion footprints in cement cast
Bend the wind to your heels pinned a sail for your mast
Peel away body of clay your core is far more vast

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  • orchidee

    Good write SB.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much Orchi I do so appreciate your continual reads they are most valued

    • arqios

      It brings a thought about that we feed and tend and shear and spindle and knit what we eventually wear in our daily lives. Oh my. ☺️

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Cryptic I like your take on this poem.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        "When memory's prick revives the sting of yesterday's thorn / and the scent of rot on today's breeze is born"...excellent! These opening lines grabs you from the outset and don't let go. Deep and relatable. Memory's can be both beautiful and eternally haunting. I have had many-a-memory pricks that have revived yesterday's thorn, that is for sure. And then the rest of the poem ensues, building upon that initial prick, with an ending that provides a glimpse of hope, that as we confront the memories of the past and the shame they can bring, that we can put those winds to our heels and move onward. We are more than the things that bring us shame, guilt and pain. Excellent write! 🖤❤️🖤👏🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Your most comprehensive and understanding review fuels the fire of exuberence and drives the engins forward. It is deeply appreciated and valued my friend

        • Thad Wilk

          A wonderfully captivating
          and evocative write!! 👍
          Great rhyme, rhythm and
          flow, way to go!! ⭐⭐⭐
          Brilliantly composed
          a pleasure to recite!!
          Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Thad for the read and comment your words are greatly valued and serve as fuel for encouragement

          • Neville



            and there at the heart of the matter, having dug deep, it lies patiently just waiting to be found ..

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Neville you dug deep and found the core

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Tony

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Neilton

                  Great work here sorenbarret ! You never fail to impress me with your talent 💓

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you Neilton you are too kind. Your remarks are deeply valued

                  • rebellion_in_sanity

                    The opening lines are simply captivating, then the rest of the piem seems to flow naturally like a stream on a hilly terrain. Loved it 🎇

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks Rebellion for the read and gracious words of support they are very helpful.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Yes the core of our body and mind can be infinite soren

                      Andy

                      • sorenbarrett

                        So true Gold. Thanks for the read and comment it is appreciated.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Wow 💜

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thanks friend for the word. I will take it with the heart as good not a disaster lol. As always it is appreciated.

                          • Teddy.15

                            Breathtaking poetry dear sorrenbarret 🌹



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