In a town where the mugs overflow,
With laughter and dance in a row,
The beer flows like streams,
And all share their dreams,
As the autumn leaves flutter and glow.
A jolly old fellow named Fred,
Found a giant pretzel instead.
With a grin on his face,
He claimed first place,
In the feast where good cheer’s widely spread!
- Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 28th, 2024 06:44
- Comment from author about the poem: a double limerick for a bit of fun.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 51
Comments8
Cheers X 2. πΊ
Gets one o these from me ππor rather two .. that's a dubble you owe me by the way .. π
Whose counting by the way π€£
Love the double limerick! They're always fun...and then add in beer! πΊ Ha! Cheers! Excellent job!
Glad to be of service!
Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and reminded me this is the season and not one poem about it have I written. I think I'll break out the beer and get to work.
Lesser Oktoberfest poems during Election Year!
Good writes A.
Writes, with a final βsβ yeS! π€ͺ
Great lines. Enjoyed it.
Thanks Young Fella! ππ»
I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.
Good to be sure; sure as sure could be!
May that good cheer be forever with us arqois.
Andy
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