Oktoberfest

arqios

In a town where the mugs overflow,
With laughter and dance in a row,
The beer flows like streams,
And all share their dreams,
As the autumn leaves flutter and glow.

A jolly old fellow named Fred,
Found a giant pretzel instead.
With a grin on his face,
He claimed first place,
In the feast where good cheer’s widely spread! 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 28th, 2024 06:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: a double limerick for a bit of fun.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Cheers X 2. 🍺

  • Neville



    Gets one o these from me πŸ‘πŸ‘or rather two .. that's a dubble you owe me by the way .. 😎

    • arqios

      Whose counting by the way 🀣

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Love the double limerick! They're always fun...and then add in beer! 🍺 Ha! Cheers! Excellent job!

      • arqios

        Glad to be of service!

      • sorenbarrett

        Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and reminded me this is the season and not one poem about it have I written. I think I'll break out the beer and get to work.

        • arqios

          Lesser Oktoberfest poems during Election Year!

        • orchidee

          Good writes A.

          • arqios

            Writes, with a final β€œs” yeS! πŸ€ͺ

          • Young Fella

            Great lines. Enjoyed it.

            • arqios

              Thanks Young Fella! πŸ™πŸ»

            • David Wakeling

              I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.

              • arqios

                Good to be sure; sure as sure could be!

              • Goldfinch60

                May that good cheer be forever with us arqois.

                Andy



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