Dark Hallway

Tony36

Down the dark hallway scary and bleak 

The door at the end is what I seek

What is beyond 

I don't know 

My mind can only guess

 

A new world

A new univers

Full of the most wonderful things

Or

A portal to Hell

With mosters from my worst nightmare 

 

The closesr I get to the door 

The insanity rises

The hallway dark and bleak 

Still that door I seek

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 29th, 2024 07:39
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • 2781

    Creeak...

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Excellent write. Indeed, which is scarier, the dark hallway or moving beyond into the unknown, yet the point is to move forward. Excellent write Tony! Well done!

    • sorenbarrett

      We all look to our fears to find what lies inside. A poem deeper than at first glance.

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • Neville



        its the uncertainty that many find irresistibly compelling and alluring .. isn't it

        • Tony36

          Thank you Nevilie

        • orchidee

          Ahhh, you made a visit to the mother-in-law's house then? lol.

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • Dove

            Sounds like a dream, or is it a nightmare? Very relatable

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Lorenz

              powerful inspiration !

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • Teddy.15

                Wonderful in metaphor that door will swing open one day 🌹

                • Tony36

                  Thank you Teddy

                • Goldfinch60

                  We all go through doors in our lives Tony and most of them take us to wonderful places.

                  Andy

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you Andy

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Very atmospheric, Tony. Really enjoyed.

                    • Tony36

                      Thank you Tom

                    • Dan Williams

                      I think I'll take door number two. Nice work here.

                      • Tony36

                        Thank you Dan



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