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arqios


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In front of the koban, leaves swirl,
Star-B’s crammed with cozy laughter,
Autumn's chill wraps us in warmth.

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 30th, 2024 05:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: koban (Jp) police box/kiosk sijo (Kr) Korean poetry form Star-B shortening of a coffee brand/chain
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29
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  • David Wakeling

    This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent

    • arqios

      I’m quite a fan of the chill, but only if I can stay warm enough the whole season! 🍂 in the air!

    • sorenbarrett

      To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque

      • arqios

        Autumn does have its appeal wherever it has encountered me or I it 🍂

      • Neville



        As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble 👍👍

        • arqios

          We shall learn of all these varied forms in the days to come, weather permitting ! Stay safe N 🙏🏻

        • Tony36

          Bravo

        • Teddy.15

          Beautiful. 🍂

        • Goldfinch60

          May that warmth always be with us arqois.

          Andy

          • arqios

            Yes, may it be so, Andy!



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