In front of the koban, leaves swirl,
Star-B’s crammed with cozy laughter,
Autumn's chill wraps us in warmth.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 30th, 2024 05:29
- Comment from author about the poem: koban (Jp) police box/kiosk sijo (Kr) Korean poetry form Star-B shortening of a coffee brand/chain
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This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
Iām quite a fan of the chill, but only if I can stay warm enough the whole season! š in the air!
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
Autumn does have its appeal wherever it has encountered me or I it š
As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble šš
We shall learn of all these varied forms in the days to come, weather permitting ! Stay safe N šš»
Bravo
Beautiful. š
May that warmth always be with us arqois.
Andy
Yes, may it be so, Andy!
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