~> If Love Was A Planet

Thad Wilk

If love was a planet

you would be my galaxy.

If your your hugs were falling leaves

October, my favorite month would be.

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If your lips were candy kisses

I'd savor every one and crave for more.

If your arms were angel wings my love,

in these heavens above we'd soar~

 

     ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

  • Author: Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2024 08:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: Brevity..
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 92
  • Users favorite of this poem: RSM0812
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  • sorenbarrett

    The chain of love is strong and passion is revealed in this poem. Very nice.

    • Thad Wilk

      Hi Soren!! 👋 🍵
      Thank you my friend!
      Great hearing from you!! 😊
      Best regards ✌️ Thad

    • Tony36

      Brilliant

      • Thad Wilk

        Howdy Tony!! 👋 🤠
        Thanks guy for
        stopping by!! 👍
        Best regards ✌️ Thad

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • orchidee

          A fine write T - expressive, flowing, rhythmic, etc.... Me not being 'brevity' but gushing! lol.

          • Thad Wilk

            Hii Orchidee!! 🐹🐹 👋
            Thank you my friend!! ☺️
            Always great a hearing
            from ya!! 👍
            Best regards ✌️ Thad

          • Thomas W Case

            Beautiful.

            • Thad Wilk

              Howdy Thomas!! 👋 🤠
              Thank you for
              your comment,
              always appreciate your visits!! 👍
              Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful loving words Thad.

              Andy

              • Thad Wilk

                Hii ya Andy!! 👋 🤠
                Thank you for
                your inspiring words!! ⭐⭐⭐
                Best regards my friend!!
                Peace. ✌️ Thad

              • Teddy.15

                Romantic ❤️

                • Thad Wilk

                  Hii Teddy!! 🧸 👋
                  Thank you poetess!! ❤️
                  Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad

                • Ellen Marsell

                  So beautiful!

                  • Thad Wilk

                    Hii Ellen!! 👋 🤠
                    Thank you poetess
                    for stopping by my way!! 🌻
                    Glad you enjoyed
                    y'all have a NICE day!!
                    Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad

                  • RSM0812

                    This is really good.

                    • Thad Wilk

                      Howdy my friend!! 👋 🍵
                      Thank you for stopping
                      by my way!
                      I appreciate your comment,
                      y'all have a great day!! 👍
                      Best regards ✌️ Thad

                    • Young Fella

                      Awesome lines! Loves them.

                      • Thad Wilk

                        Howdy my friend!! 👋 🍵
                        Thank you for stoping
                        by my way!! 👍
                        I appreciate your comment,
                        y'all have a great day!!
                        Best regards ✌️ peace Thad



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