The (W)Hole of Darkness
The (w)hole of my life
is filled with blackened darkness.
Created when you left
I now, carry Megatons of pain
that recur again and again.
Loneliness tears at my heart
no matter the space within a day
but it is worse in the night
darkness at every corner
nowhere is there light.
The intense gravity of loss
crushes my soul
splinters my heart
until I feel like nothing more
than a spot of energy.
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Author:
MendedFences27 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The heaviest time of love.
- Category: Love
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Comments4
You have described it far more beautifully than I ever could, whether it's lost through death or just people who change it's love, and when it's gone, its gone. It's everything you have so exquisitely expressed here. Kudos 🌹
Thank you, Teddy. Any breakup of a relationship weighs heavily on both parties. Here I tried to stress this weight by allegorically comparing it to a black hole. Thank you for your kind words. They are much appreciated.
Wonderfully emotive words Phil.
Andy
You just hit the proverbial nail squarely and so very poetically on its head sir .. Neville
Very well understood my friend. Been there all too many times. Nice work.
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