iris of eye of mine's
petal-free; lily - leech'd of life; white
rose rues, on kami's grave
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Author:
Rin the Magnificent (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 1st, 2024 12:46
- Comment from author about the poem: Instead of 5-7-5 syllables, there's 5-7-5 words in this haiku. Metaphors used veil the deeper meaning of the poem.
- Category: Haiku
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Comments2
Love it
Thank thee!
You're welcome
Hmm. Lovely and intriguing with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
I appreciate thy kind words!
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