The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell's chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
Poetry's power senses no fences
Born from mind's womb, words lost in menses
bloody deliverance of Egyptian ren
Drops fall from a bleeding pen
Conceived to nurse on the nipples of thought
Here's a poem begot
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: November 2nd, 2024 04:35
- Comment from author about the poem: ren- the name by which the gods know the individual's soul
- Category: Unclassified
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The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell's chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.
Superbly crafter dear friend. 🌹
Once again thank you my poetic friend for your most kind words of encouragement. The are always so appreciated
Brilliant
Thank you Tony for the review and most gracious word of encouragement
You're welcome
Wide is the poet’s scope and larger still is poetry’s reach!
Thank you Cryptic its deep waters have powerful currents not seen from the surface.
Good write SB.
Thanks Orchi that means a lot
darn well conceived if you ask me .. Neville
Thanks so much Neville it is most appreciated
This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi amigo
Thank you David for the encouraging words as always they are appreciated
Well done! Nice work.
Thank you John your words are appreciated
Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! 🌞
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks so much for the read and kind words of encouragement
Beautiful work.
Thanks so much Thomas
Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. "Born from mind's womb, words lost in menses" sums that up nicely. Fine work.
Your words are most appreciated Dan thank you for your encouragement
Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!
Thank you so much Tristan your comments are most valued
You are most welcome!
Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.
Andy
Thanks Andy you are so right they do. Appreciate your comment
Just the right inspiration to write about anything and everything!
Thank you so much for the read and comment it is most appreciated
The line "Can you touch a bell's chime?" will echo in my mind for a long time to come! The poem is simply stunning
Thank you so much my friend for your most kind words of support they a cherrished
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