I WISH IT WERE A SHE
Progress pushes around the bend when we seek truth and when pretending ends
Success slips and dips if the fear of change remains a stowaway
Pretense can then command it’s sour presence and blurs any blueprint charted toward the healing progress we intend
Ego driven Men, whose Past admittance of mistakes has never found its place
An Existence of unchecked Density
Blind with pride their shared propensity
This predilection points to man A battle stand and half of a plan
Testosterone leak inside the brain ? Consider instead , Women who have a plenty and ready brilliance claimed and place aside false pride and fame.
. A fair and humble pure agenda, powerfully joined by strengths conjoined , in spirit and in body and everyone alive. Let’s Decide that Women Should guide the Human Race, let double X guide with Lady Grace Poised to birth her plan for us to thrive Govern just and wise to keep hope alive
Bobby O
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Author:
Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A Retitled and surgically Rewriiten update of a golf a previous idea that needed sharpening
- Category: Reflection
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let's see if your wish comes true
good write, indeed
Itβs looking tough. Either way sentiments apply to business education and everything, but you got a good point
yes it is tough indeed
We can but live in hope .. can't we .. you get a dubble crossed fingers thumbs up from from this side of the pond sir .. ππ€ππ€
Dig!
This is a poem that must be read out loud to appreciate the intertwining rhythm and rhyme as they flow off the tongue. The internal rhyme is quite complex and ties this poem togeather like a shoe lace. It pulses with power. Very nice Bobby
Very cool. Since I do an open mic here and there I do push that out loud cadence thing. It does affect how others receive and that is limiting do I guess I should vary. Your words mean a lot
Hope floating in the fluid motion of words and images!
Nice. My last girl friend had that Fluid motion. Thanks for your kind words my friend.
Brilliant
ππ clapping!
A mellifluous and
evocative write!! π
Great internal rhyme,
flows like a gentle stream
AND a treat to recite!!π―
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
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