Notice of absence from arqios
Be kindβ¦.
β¦. words donβt rewind
Be kindβ¦.
β¦. words donβt rewind
In the softness of a lingering kiss,
Time stands still, hearts entwined and bright,
A moment held, a sweet, tender bliss,
In the softness of a lingering kiss,
Two souls collide, igniting the night,
Each breath a promise, a whispered wish,
In the softness of a lingering kiss,
Time stands still, hearts entwined and bright.
- Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 8th, 2024 06:10
- Comment from author about the poem: β¦and now a Triolet.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 52
Comments7
A beautiful moment expressed in a poem. So nicely worded loved it
Thanks Soren ππ»
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
Thanks Tristan CC ππ»
You are welcome!
I think I was there once. Thanks for the reminder.
Everyone should have at least once!
So very true arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy ππ»
very nicely executed ..
Cheers Neville! ππ»
Gentle and lovely writing . I liked this )
Thanks CD, glad to hear of it. Most appreciated ππ»
Really lovely expression in this Triolet. The rhyme is so subtle it is barely noticed.
Well done.
Oh thatβs good to hear Cassie! Glad that you mentioned it. Much appreciated ππ»
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