Children are watching us choose
Hate to blanket our fears
Indiscriminately.
Lessons unlearned from the past
Develop into death blooms
Ragings like herpes; we are filled with
Excuses our children will
Never forgive us for.
© 2024 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
- Author: Tristan Robert Lange ( Offline)
- Published: November 9th, 2024 07:40
- Comment from author about the poem: #3. An acrostic. Part of a series on societal warnings.
- Category: Sociopolitical
- Views: 30
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Comments5
Good write T.
Thank you, my friend! I have a whole series of these coming! Your read and feedback are very appreciated!
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you so much Tony! I very much appreciate it! ππ€β€οΈπ€
You're welcome
An awesome Acrostic
poem, strong feelings
and message indeed! π―
Short yet succinct
and my pleasure to read!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
Thank you my friend! My appreciated. π€β€οΈπ€π
A frightening thought thatβs all too true well written and nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing.
Frightening indeed! Thank you! Your time and feedbakc are always appreciated! π€β€οΈπ€π
Neat and concise is something I can handle - many thanks.
Sometimes it does happen, children act on their judgement, and thus we have progress, but improvements forward are patchy in the extreme.
Boy do I know that to be true! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, my friend!
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