Here I am,
Just lying in the dark,
Undisturbed for so many years,
Just minding my own business,
Getting more mature as time passes.
I think of those times
On the sun kissed hills of Spain;
Lying and growing in the sun,
Those beautiful Senoritas caring
For my every whim through childhood,
Into young adulthood,
Until fully grown.
Magic times of joy and freedom.
Maturity brings change;
A different way of life.
Squeezed and pressed in many ways.
A new way, a new place.
Resting within a wooden cavern,
Surrounded by the smell of smoke.
The smell getting into my being.
Longer and longer I rest,
The odour completely permeating
My life, my soul, my spirit
Then comes the day
After so many years, now mature,
And ready for my journey of life
Into old age.
Now in a glass cage,
Resting quietly in the dark,
Ready for my fate.
Getting stronger, even more mature,
Until that day, which will soon come,
And I am lifted gently, lovingly,
Withdrawn from my peace.
My life is at an end,
As I flow gently into the glass
And am enjoyed by a connoisseur
Of Rioja Gran Reserva.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Rioja is my favourite type of wine.
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Not sure whether it is the timing or lots of other things besides .. but this might easily be taken for a war poem .. what is not in doubt though, is that you have and with much respect, excelled Andy .. Neville
Thank you for your kind words Neville, much appreciated.
Andy
Good write Gold. You know why you didn't invite me round for a glass!
Thanks Orchi. No you would try and water it down.
Andy
A wonderful poem Andy, it begins with the feel of the narrator being a person, but soon becomes a wine, a beautiful, beautiful surprise
Thank you soren, much appreciated.
Andy
And don't forget the cheese that would go all so very elegantly with that wine. 🤣 Gorgeous. Fine wine you certainly are dear Andy 🌹
Yes Teddy. dolce latte would go very well with it. Thank you.
Andy
The story of a great bottle of wine. Very clever tale and powerful metaphors.Wonderful
Most kind David, thank you.
Andy
In wonder and amazement of vintage vines producing clusters that bring excellent wine in the skilful hands of time endorsed vintners!
So very true arqios, thank you.
Andy
“Salud” - I'll 'fess up - I consulted Prof Google...and...Save me a glass, Andy - I'm not investing myself this time,....😃
There would always be a glass here for you Dave. Good Health.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
A lovely write
much enjoyed too!! 👍
I'll have a taste, of
that Riôja with you!! 🍷 🍷
Thanks for sharing!!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
Thank myou Thad, there will always be a glass here for you.
Andy
A fine write. Nicely done. And a fantastic song choice as always.
Thank you Tom, much appreciated.
Andy
An unexpected ending Andy. You didn’t give it away. I enjoy a glass of wine myself. Such an enjoyable read. Hope your Tuesday has been a good one.
Thank you Cassie, enjoy your wine.
Andy
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