The sky has been so dull and grey for days
But today was different, the sun did shine
Bringing light and pleasure to all our ways
And goodness to all who we did combine.
We start off this day drinking our coffee,
Having met friends on this glorious day,
Talking and laughing with glorious glee
As through this morning we wind through our way.
In the afternoon we croquet with all,
Hitting balls in the glorious sunlight,
The cheer of the day did to us all call,
Making our lives so beautifully bright.
The sun dispersed all those grey clouds from us
And brought beauty and wonder to us all.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Such a beautiful sunny day yesterday.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments9
it invariably shines on the wrighteous .. 😎👍
I certainly does Neville, thank you.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
A beautiful recitation of a wonderful day set in the form of a sonnet. Very well done Andy.
So kind soren, thank you.
Andy
(Warning: Misery response): It peed down all day, and did not let up. You just think you're clever, getting the sun to sweat it, shining for you.....😜
It has done that as well here Dave, it was such a pleasure to see that big yellow ball in the sky on that day.
Andy
Just bubbling over and effervescent!
Most kind arqios, thank you.
Andy
What a wonderful day and a beautiful way to capture it! Well done, Andy!
Much appreciated Tristan, thank you.
Andy
You’re welcome!
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
A sunny day good friends and croquet.It doesn't get much better than that. Delightful poem compadre
It certainly doesn't David, thank you for your kind words.
Andy
Sounds like you have a lovely day. Perfectly captured too.
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