Welcome to this house, welcome one and all,
Don’t get too comfortable, you will have to stand in the hall,
This is the home of the old men who are waiting for the call.
The old women are sitting sharing cups of tea.
The children are a little scared of what they might see.
The young men are outraged but cannot flee.
The girls are crying, heartbroken and disappointed,
The priests are comforting those anointed,
And the pregnant ladies are suffering and disjointed.
Welcome children, let me read you a story,
You have come to the path of glory,
But don’t stair at the injured they may be a little gory.
So sit down and share tales of your fears,
Have a joke and sing a song to while away the years,
For you have wandered into the house of tears.
- Author: David Wakeling ( Offline)
- Published: November 12th, 2024 06:25
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Comments9
Wow! Excellent! Rings beautifully and has an air of truth about it. Welcome to the house of tears indeed! Bravo! 🌹👏
Thank you so for commenting
You're welcome!
Magnificently rendered, David!
Thank you mi amigo
For that is the end of all men; and the living will lay it to his heart.
Thanks for reading
A most poignant read David. Your stanzas beautifully conveyed. All best wishes.
Muchas grasias mi amigo. Thank you so much
WOW
Wow indeed.Thank you
You're welcome
At first, I thought you were riding about an old folks home which might be the case. Nonetheless, it sounds even more grim and maybe a morgue or mortuary. Then again this may be a metaphor for how we see ourselves and others nicely written.
Make of it what you will. There are no wrong answers in this house of tears. Thanks for your insight
Wonderful words David.
Andy
Thank you so much
This is just wonderful. Pondering these last years also drives me to cry, to write. Nice work.
I hope they are tears of joy. Thanks for commenting
what a beautiful and poignant scene you have created
Well done
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