Forever prey to predators
Engorging themselves on our souls
As we become the very thing we have
Reservations of in the first place.
© 2024 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
- Author: Tristan Robert Lange ( Offline)
- Published: November 12th, 2024 07:21
- Comment from author about the poem: #5. A modified acrostic. A poetic warning on becoming what we dread. Part of a series on societal warnings.
- Category: Sociopolitical
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
Comments8
Scary indeed. There was this book on the net about an experiment in a jail with guards and inmates studying how good people become bad!
Oh for sure. It is amazing how good people can wind up doing very bad things! Very scary! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! Always appreciated my friend! 🙏
There is no fear in love; but perfect love casts out fear:
Unfortunately for many they never get to hear!
"There is no fear in love; but perfect love casts out fear:" 💯 Truth! Thank you for reading and for your reflection! Much appreciated, friend! 🙏❤️
A great acrostic that warns us to not become what we fear then we would have to live with italways
Exactly, my friend! I truly appreciate your time and analysis! Thank you so much! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
That you there in that pic? Yep, it's fairly scary! lol.
You know it! And this time, the bad hair day is happening off the back! 😳 LOL! Thanks for reading and commenting my friend! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you so much Tony! Much appreciated! 🙏
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A terrorIFIC Acrostic,
sCaRY great imagery!! 😱
Two thumbs up,
If I had three hands
I'd give you three!! 🥇
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
Thank you Thad! Much appreciated! 🙏
I do think you're fond of spelling, (: I quite like this series and hope it brings many to thought.
Yeah, I really hit the acrostic form by storm! 🤣🙃 I am glad you are liking it and I have more to come after a little break tomorrow (as I have something else I am publishing). Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Much appreciated! 🙏🖤
of course! im ready for it!
Ya, "...fear hath torment--" of which I know too keenly well. If only--ah. Lovely in charming brevity with superb poignancy and great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
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