I am not what happened to me
Those days are gone and past
I am the result of the struggle
The burning fire within me
That has refined me
That has made me better
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Tony36 (
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Concise and powerful and relatable. I feel the same way! Amen! Bravo!
Thank you Tristan
You are welcome Tony!
Turn not to the right hand nor to the left:
Thank you
I am saying good write Tony.
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A very positive message conveyed in your lines Tony. Quite inspirational. Nice brevity.
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Succinct statements such as this make some of the hardest hitting and powerful of poems .. succinctus superbus . simple as that .. neville
Thank you Nevilie
This is wonderful acceptance can lead us into a world of triumph. 🌹 Beautiful statement a bit like me and me tea. 🤣
Thank you Teddy
Very good Tony yes, we are all a product of those forces that have made us.. A great poem about who you are.
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Cogito ergo sum !
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Forged from fire. I love it. Well done
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Great poem,
awe-inspiring too!! 👍
Eloquently penned
much enjoyed thank you!! 🥇
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
Great write, Tony. I am says I can!
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As I say to people Tony "You cannot teach experience."
Andy
Thank You Andy
Very inspiring lines🥰
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Loaded with intent and purpose... Respect!
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An inspiring piece, Tony. Love it.
Thank you Tom
A powerful message I needed to hear. Thank you Tony
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I stumbled on this by accident. I'm resistant to the method here (and you are not the only one) of blanket commenting without content masses of threads in the hope, I suppose of attracting clicks on your posts in return.
Having clarified that....
I thought your piece was great in its simplicity but even greater in its message. Not directed at anyone, it pinpoints the continuing work we all should be doing on ourselves.
Thanks for that.
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Common sense, trademark of optimism, nice work.
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Nice. Short is better. Strengthens message.
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wonderful. hats off to you..
i wish one day i can say it too.
Thank you
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