I need your love so much my sweet.
When you're near my heart skips a beat.
I've loved you from the very start.
My darlin' we shan't ever part.
Without you my life's incomplete.
^^
Holding you close I feel loves heat.
All other things seem obsolete.
I love you more than you could know.
I need your love.
^^
Our romance 'twill last, it's concrete.
To paradise we'll both retreat.
My love for you shall only grow,
darlin' you set my heart aglow.
There's no one else that can compete.
I need your love~
^^^***^^^***^^^***^^^***^^^
-
Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 18th, 2024 10:29
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is called 'RONDEAU', it is a French form, 15 lines, consists of 3 stanzas, a quintet, a quatrain and a sestet... RHYME SCHEME: a-a-b-b-a ,, a-a-b-R ,, a-a-b-b-a-R ,, all other lines are 8 syllables.....
- Category: Love
- Views: 19
Offline)
Comments3
Impressive, my friend! A form I have yet to write in. At some point, I figure I just might! The form and the words both make for a beautiful expression of love. Wonderful job! 👏🌹
Hii ya Tristan!! 👋 🍵
Thanks my friend!! 😊
There's a few more forms
I have to try yet, my favOrite
is still the Monotetra, it flows
nice and you can add as
many stanzas as you wish.🍀
Great hearing from ya! 😃
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
You're welcome, my friend!
Wonderful loving words Thad.
Andy
Hii ya Andy!! 👋 🍵
Thanks my friend!
Great hearing from ya!! 🤠
Have a great Tuesday!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
I bet these are not the easiest to craft .. an impressive form that I am not likely to try and attempt .. much credit to you my friend for pulling it off so well .. Neville
Hii ya Neville! Wave 👋 🍵
Thank you, glad you enjoyed! 👍
Hope you have a
wonderful Wednesday!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.