A Losing Game

Cassie58

it seems a tad distasteful 

that raised wine glasses 

clink for Amy 

 

especially when her crusade 

against alcohol addiction 

became a lost cause 

 

ten years gone while our 

bluebird of happiness swings 

in its usual place 

 

suspended 

from a central wooden beam 

over our summer deck 

 

silent appreciation 

as back to black plays its dark 

lament 

 

as lantern light flickers 

honeysuckle vines shoot strands 

from beehive chaos 

 

saluting the mistress of song’s 

creative vowels 

in scented respect 

 

  • Author: Cassie58 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2024 09:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Written on the 10th anniversary of her death Listened to her again last night. What a talent. What a sad end to a short life.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 81
  • Users favorite of this poem: Thoughtless, Teddy.15, Thomas W Case
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  • Thoughtless

    I do not drink alcohol but have suffered the effects of family members who were addicted, Thankfully, they have their acts together today. Your composition is a service.

    • Cassie58

      Thank you so much. Pleased you found value in my poem. I appreciate your thoughts.

      • Thoughtless

        YW

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        A very sad end and an extremely talented soul. Tortured but beautiful. Love Back to Black. Great album, great artist. Fitting tribute. Indeed, it is amazing at how insensitive and careless people can be with their alcohol traditions. Astute observation. Brava! 🌹🌹👏🖤

        • Cassie58

          Many thank yous. Yes, she was a great artist and it is a tragedy how abruptly her life ended. I appreciate you stopping by to share your thoughts.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You are welcome Cassie!

          • sorenbarrett

            A tribute to a sad soul who left us with much music having lived a life of pain and misery. Addiction is often chosen by artists as their medication of choice. Well expressed Cassie.

            • Cassie58

              Thank you Soren. A sad situation altogether. She had a wonderful voice. I appreciate very much your thoughts and your visit.

            • Teddy.15

              Yet still not many really take much notice, as we just lost Liam Payne too, I remember sitting in disbelief, she really was a talent, fame took its toll, alcohol and drugs far to easy to find. Such a kind tribute dearest Cassie. 🌹

              • Cassie58

                Thank you Teddy. All that talent gone so soon. Addictions too difficult for her to cope with. She had an incredible voice. Thank you Teddy for always supporting and your encouragement of my writing efforts. You are very much appreciated 🌹

                • Teddy.15

                  ❤️🇬🇧

                • arqios

                  Makes me muse about the disconnect… too many have been cut off from their possible life so early on, and we are still here whether or not we “deserve” to be, if that even is the word for it.

                  • Cassie58

                    Addictions are a curse. We have had them in my own family and they cause immense pain to all. I am thankful that my dear one is still alive. She struggles so and so do we. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

                    • arqios

                      The title says quite a lot! So we soldier on and muddle through.

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Beautiful tribute. I can hear her as I read your poem. Such a loss.

                      • Cassie58

                        Thank you Thomas. I love her voice. She was a one off.

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        You could, I think raise a wineglass without too much guilt as there were many factors, psychological, social, the industry’s pressures which contributed to Amy’s death. Your poem is in good company with the many and lasting tributes to a great talent, Cassie (Lassie incognito).

                        • Cassie58

                          We did, we drank to her anyway Dave. Pleased you like my tribute to her. I was and remain a huge fan of hers. Thank you for stopping by.

                        • Thad Wilk

                          A very poignant,
                          emotional and touching poem
                          and thoughts on the
                          horrors of addiction!😢
                          She was a fabulous singer 🎵 🎶
                          and so young to die of
                          this affliction....😕
                          Thanks for sharing poetess!!
                          Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹. Thad

                          • Cassie58

                            Many thanks Thad for your thoughtful response. Yes she was a fabulous singer and I hope this poem just justice to her. All the best.

                          • Dan Williams

                            So hard to say fare well. I've had a lot of practice. Well Written.

                            • Cassie58

                              Thank you Dan for stopping by. Pleased you found my words well written.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Wonderful tribute Cassie.

                              Andy

                              • Cassie58

                                Thank you Andy. She is missed. Such a wonderful singer, such a short life.

                              • Neville



                                You just sent shivers up and down my spine .. what an amazing tribute to a one heck of an artist taken too soon .. Where did that decade go .. I remember visiting my son who lived around the corner from her and seeing all the floral tributes banners and cards ..

                                • Cassie58

                                  Many thank yous Neville for your lovely review. She has been gone longer than ten years. I wrote this a while back. She still remains a favourite female artist for me. I play her music quite often as I’m doing housework 🙂 Have a lovely day my friend. Take it easy.

                                  • Neville



                                    I neva woz much cop with sums .. busy @ the mo but enjoy yorn .. N 😉👍

                                  • NafisaSB

                                    what an irony that glasses are raised in toast to one who crusaded against alcoholism.
                                    a poignant and respectful eulogy !

                                    • Cassie58

                                      Dear friend, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Amy of the wonderful voice, sadly missed. Have a beautiful day.

                                      • NafisaSB

                                        wishing you a lovely day too. keep up the good work

                                        • Cassie58

                                          Thank you so much 🌺

                                        • Ria_1005

                                          Loved the emotional write

                                          • Cassie58

                                            Thank you Ria, I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a comment. Delighted you called on my page.

                                            • Ria_1005

                                              The least I can do is appreciate and motivate you're writing... Great poets like you deserve to scale new heights!

                                              • Cassie58

                                                You are really kind with your encouragement and that helps me no end. Thank you.

                                              • jim56

                                                such a beautiful poem and sad to
                                                a wonderful tribute wonderfully written
                                                so sad when addiction takes a talent away
                                                your words say it all and expresses your feelings amazing
                                                dont ever stop writing jim xx

                                                • Cassie58

                                                  Thank you Jim. She had such an amazing voice. Love her album Back to Black. Please you like this tribute to Amy.

                                                  • jim56

                                                    i sing myself have a recording studio
                                                    in my bedroom been involved with music a lot of years
                                                    used to do pubs and clubs also had my own karoake buisness
                                                    your writing talent is incredible
                                                    i watched the film it was fantastic xx jim

                                                  • teardrop

                                                    My dad was an extremely bad alcoholic, he would make himself at least 3 large half and half vodka and grapefruit juice to set by his bed at night so he would have them to calm his shakes when he woke up in the morning. Needless to say, growing up was a story its self. I'm babbling on....love ypur sty;e of writting and nice to meet you as well.

                                                    • Cassie58

                                                      Hello teardrop. Sorry to hear about your Dad. My own family have suffered similar. It’s not easy. Pleased that you enjoyed your visit here. Your thoughts appreciated.



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