The Band

Tony36

Tommy Rum played drum

William star played guitar 

Jennifer mellow played piano 

Lisa black played sax

 

Were they famous 

Maybe someday 

 

For now just a garage band

With big plans in their heads

They dream away

As they play

 

Just a garage band

Birthday parties

Malls

And Fairs

They play wherever they can

 

Will they break through

Will they break free

Maybe someday it shall be

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 21st, 2024 08:32
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  • Neville



    We have to hang on to our dreams don't we .. Each of my three old bands - Split Lip, Average Contents & Shylock had a thing going for a while but then Jimbo quit, another guy had a bit of a meltdown and the rest of us either went on to uni, or found paid jobs and that was that .. dream over .. Neville

    • Doggerel Dave

      That is worth a conversion into your characteristic form and a pin, Neville... Please!

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        As one who used to be in a garage band, this hit home. Granted, we never "broke through," but I would not change that time for the world! Thank you for bringing me back there, Tony! Excellent write! 👏👏

      • David Wakeling

        This is clever and fun, exploring the trials of starting a new band.Enjoyable

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • Doggerel Dave

          On the money - sense of purpose - And who knows, perhaps one day they will win the lottery.

          • Tony36

            Yankees you

          • Thad Wilk

            Great poem and hope filled
            thoughts thank you! 👍
            Some dreams it seems,
            do come true! 😊
            Best regards, rock on! 🎵 🎶 🎶
            ✌️ Peace. Thad

            • Tony36

              Thank you Thad, best regards

            • Dan Williams

              My garage band only played out once but started me on a lifetime of listening and playing music. This has held me sane now for many years. Thanks for this.

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • Goldfinch60

                Playing any music with others is so wonderful Tony, I have played in bands in the past and am in two choirs at the moment and all is so enjoyable.

                Andy

                • Tony36

                  Thank you



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