The Sense to Shake it Off
She chose bold prose her lyrics overt
Expertly aimed with intention to hurt
Might Swifty style define her revenge and her plan
Bare assed and shout loud I’m no longer her man
No terms no discussion
No battles no War
Why bother complaining
What is it good for
BobbyO
- Author: Bobby O ( Offline)
- Published: November 25th, 2024 03:25
- Comment from author about the poem: Trying to dance away and delay turned out to be a poor strategy
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 25
Comments6
Emotions come and go in sometime like having swept the pile of dust up on the floor opening. The door allows an incoming breeze to spread all back to where it began. Nicely written, Bobby.
‘Absolutely nothing!’ Don’t get me started! So powerful the knee jerk reaction flew into next year’s annual check up 👍🏻
you ask a very pertinent question .. and I guess the answer, is like war .. absolutely nothing .. maybe better luck next time 🎶🎵🎵🐧👍
Great read, thoughts
and message penned!! 👍
Yeah,
why bother complaining¿ 😳
Wonderfully composed,
much enjoyed my friend! 🍹😄
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
Never mind mi amigo there are plenty more fish in the sea. This is quite a confronting poem.Better days ahead.
Powerful. The pain is palpable.
Thanks TC
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