will the war be over

jim56

will the war be over will trump get his way
will he stop the war in really just one day
can ukraine survive will the kiliing  cease
or just go on and on  so killing will increase

thousands have been killed in a war that shouldnt  be
ukraine they keep on fighting to once again be free
hoping that the killing will end and be no more
then the people of ukraine can finally end the war

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2024 06:31
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  • Cassie58

    We just want the war to end, but not at the expense of dictators winning and stamping their feet on more territory. I hope Trump can do an acceptable deal. Too much killing in this world of ours, too much suffering and violence. A very topical subject Jim, pulls on the heart strings. Have a happy Wednesday.

    • jim56

      hope it can be brought to a fair and justified end
      and all the fighting has not been in vain
      hi cassie hope you ok
      actually got some sunshine still cold but bright
      cat said hello and likes your poems lol
      thankyou for always lovely comment
      have a great day jim xx

      • Cassie58

        You’ve got a lovely cat:) Make sure you give her some treats Jim. Been cold today.

        • jim56

          did give her a treat bought a sunbed lol
          had a bit of sun here today
          but very cold sit by the fire days at mo
          even the fire is sitting by the fire lol
          hope you ok and keeping warm
          take care keep warm jim xx

        • sorenbarrett

          A poem for peace, a noble cause nicely written Jim

          • jim56

            hope it will end with justice for ukraine
            thanks for comment means lot

          • 2781

            If they stop what they start, villany gets the praise.

            • jim56

              needs a justified end enough lives lost now
              thanks for comment

              • 2781

                It's ridiculous, brothers killing brothers, all helped by the global big mothers..

              • Michael Edwards

                'Tis a sad world with some pretty awful leaders who have no moral values or conscience - we can but live in hope.

                • jim56

                  your so right thanks for comment

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Praying for Ukraine's success in all of this, and to a just end to a VERY unjust war! Well done my friend! This call for peace is echoed in my heart as well. I won't turn blue holding out hope for Trump (though who knows), but I do pray a just deal is struck and that none of us have to hold anything waiting for it. Again, an excellent and timely write, Jim! 🌹👏

                  • jim56

                    im with you all the way thanks for comment

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      You bet Jim. For those of us with eyes and hearts, right? Thank you for this important poem! 🙏

                      • jim56

                        thanks for comment

                      • TobaniNataiella

                        We all should hope for a end to all wars, nothing has ever been properly resolved peacefully at the end of a gun. I fear with Ukraine what ever is decided by whoever and some kind of peace can be obtained, it will not last.

                        Putin will return at a later date, bigger and nastier than he already is, i hope i am wrong as Ukraine is a beautiful country with wonderful people.

                        • jim56

                          i totally agree with you thats what he is waiting for
                          thanks for comment

                        • Mutley Ravishes

                          Slavs are slaughtering each other
                          I thought they were brothers
                          I wonder why
                          There is more to this
                          Than meets the eye
                          It seems the old
                          Silk Road schemers
                          Have no intention
                          Of becoming leaner

                          • jim56

                            thankyou for comment



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