Best Dream Ever (senryu)

Teddy.15

 

kid in a candy store

 

drooling over yummy choice

 

pockets full of cash.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 28th, 2024 03:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: I also found Michael Edwards sorrenbarret and Andy Finch and Cassie in this one.... lol 🤣
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • sorenbarrett

    It doesn’t get any better than that. Have a wonderful day.

    • Teddy.15

      lol 🤣 happy happy day dear friend. ❤️

    • arqios

      Ack when the sweet tooth was well and kicking, that’s quite like heaven there! Glory days. 👍🏻

      • Teddy.15

        Indeed 🤣

      • Cassie58

        Can you see the smile on my face Teddy? I am a big kid too with a very sweet tooth for my sins. I would be in paradise if there was chocolate there. 😂. You wouldn’t get me out. Have a lovely day. 🌹

        • Teddy.15

          You are now added to my list 🤣 LoL love to see you smile always dearest Cassie. ❤️

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          I am the proverbial kid in the candy shop teadung this poem, Teddy. An excellent, writ and pic that has me wide-eyes and salivating! Lol! 😂 Well done, my friend. 👏🌹

          • Teddy.15

            LOL saliva away and thank you so much, happy thanksgiving 🦃 🦃

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              You are welcome! Indeed! Happy thanksgiving! 🦃🦃🦃

            • MendedFences27

              Kid in a candy store, that's the best dream ever. There definitely must be chocolate. And about another million or so treats I would wish for. Endless amounts of time and no reality setting in. Just sweetness and light. I'm stuffed with turkey and yet, now. I'm wanting candy. Your poem has pushed my holiday into overdrive. I'm now going to find a candy bar. Thank you. - Phil A.

              • Teddy.15

                lol happy thanksgiving dearest Phil. 🍭 🍬 🤗

              • Goldfinch60

                If only...... LOL

                Andy

                • Teddy.15

                  LOL 🤣



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