Omnipresent

sorenbarrett

Goodbye, adieu, adios, adeus, auf wiedersehen, sayonara, dasvidaniya, arrivederci, kwaheri, Ma’ssalaame, lehitra’ot, zaijian words to depart
Shake off the dust, nose is an arrow, nothing behind

Navajo has no word for goodbye, only physical parting, 
spirit, thought and influence are always present 
Bind the tongue
Words have power

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  • orchidee

    I said goodbye, adios, etc, etc to KP every day, but she always comes back like a bad apple,,,, or smell. Doh! lol.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much for reading and yes, I know some things never go away.

    • Teddy.15

      Truly stunning dear friend a language treat with a twist of wisdom. Addio is also a way to say goodbye in Italian when we are unlikely to meet again, just showing off my skills as a bilingual 🤣

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you, Teddy. There are many intricacies in language and I am continually learning new ones. I have gotten into trouble too many times in the past for my lack of knowledge. Your comments are always appreciated and valued.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Yeh – the subtle connotations which can attach themselves to otherwise roughly similar words to those in one’s own native language can cause confusion, Soren. As a last resort one can always fall back on “Bugger off’ 😜
        Keen write - great collection.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much, Dave. I would use the term bugger off, but I use it way too often and it’s worn out. Appreciate the comment.

        • arqios

          No good byes here, just farewell, and houroo!

          • sorenbarrett

            Yeah, goodbye is too permanent. I like to say until I see you again. Thanks for the read and the comment.

          • rebellion_in_sanity

            Such a nice piece of art! The ending especially makes one think long and hard. Loved it!

            • sorenbarrett

              I appreciate your comment more than I can tell. You got the point the end is the hook. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Ah. Words…they have the power to build up and heal or to tear down and destroy. A beautiful poem with a profound, multicultural and universal message of wisdom! Well done! 🌹👏

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much, Tristan. You definitely got the point of this one. To me there is never a goodbye only until we meet again.

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Amen. I feel the same way. You are welcome my friend!

                • Cassie58

                  Words do have power, without doubt. They can provide much joy and equally the cause of much hurt. It is difficult enough crossing international barriers and cultures, without problems arising in one’s own language. Individuals have their own way of saying things which may cause confusion to others. There’s hundreds of ways of saying something which can then be open to interpretation.

                  Navajo has no word for goodbye, only physical parting. I think he is right.

                  You made me think of my Dad, I never got the chance to say goodbye to him yet his spirit, thought and influence are ever present. No contact there at all.

                  A thought provoking write Soren.




                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you, Cassie. I grew up around mini from the Navajo nation, and these Indians carried much wisdom with them. I like very much their idea of no goodbyes that the person is always present with you and thought and in spirit.

                  • Tony36

                    Excellent

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much, Tony

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome

                      • Lorenz

                        I have invented a structured language that I no longer master because it has become a living creature that detaches itself from its creator !

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Sounds like something AI would do. Thank you for reading the poem. Appreciate the comment.

                        • Thad Wilk

                          👏👏
                          A wonderful poem
                          and message AND
                          Informative too! 👍
                          Until I see ya again,
                          much enjoyed, thank you!! 😊 👋
                          Loved it!! 😍
                          Best regards ✌️ Thad

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks, Thad. I appreciate your visit and as always, your comments are most welcome.

                          • David Wakeling

                            So many ways to say Goodbye.A very interesting poem.Thoughtful

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you, David. I appreciate your comment. Yes, there are many ways to say goodbye and not just in different languages.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Bedah soren, take care.

                              Andy

                              (Bedah - goodbye in Romulan) LOL

                              • sorenbarrett

                                That’s one. I didn’t know Andy. Thanks for reading. May you have a wonderful day

                              • Neville



                                I much prefer hello's .. they have so mush promise ..

                                • sorenbarrett

                                  Thanks, Neville. How much prefer greetings as well. A hug of meeting is much better than one of parting. Thanks for the read and comment.



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